Monday, May 5, 2008

My first crush

Oh its dangerous and uncontrollable,
people call it CRUSH.
I felt like a lady,
when those goosebumps came,
heart started racing
Y??
Because I spotted the guy,
among the thousands,
with whom i was going to spend my life.
I was ten.
He sat beside me and our world we shared.
He wasn't a dude, no beard,
neighther the abs.
Come on he was also ten.
Time passed
We had rifts,
then started sharing the gifts.
14 we were
officialy we said the three magical words
I LOVE YOU.
Whatever he used to say,
it used to make my day.
Long phone calls,late nite talks.

Oh dear
I made it very clear,
though we were near,
there should be a distance,
I had my fears,
he used to wipe my tears.
Months passed.
I did a ditch,
like they say you may even call me a bitch.
Lifetime vows broke,
I don't know the reasons that stroke.
I made a decision,
you may call it happy realisation.
I felt triumphed,
I conquered crush.

But the goosebumps still come...
oh the damn hormones...
Now i have a latest crush...

11 comments:

oshan said...

did ya ditch sum1 or was it jus a poem???
newayz twas gu...

The Transmitter said...

A very mature presentation... There are some lines which I think could have been better (which will always be there, so don't worry) but overall it's really really good. Remember I'll expect more from now on... So keep it up...

vini... said...

hey a gud poem...a lovly one...!!!

vini... said...

"Now i have a latest crush..."
meanz...?

AaYuShI said...

Cho cute!! :)

You always remember your FIRST crush..hai na?

Great blog anyway!
Hope to see you posting on my blog REALLY SOON! :D

CheeRz,
Aayushi

sandy said...

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo............................ab pata chala mujhe tujhe woh sab jokes kaha se milte h.................hmmmm..................10saal ke bachhe ko toh baksh deti.....

Attila said...

i swear my last poem wasn't written after reading this.. ;)

Abhisek said...

good one...guess you could have done better without rhyming...but anyways was a good one...

$h33t@n$hu said...

hey hii..nice poem..did ya really hv those goosebumps agn n agn???

Anurag Gupta said...

Brilliant poem!! Too good..

Anonymous said...

shows tht little girl is still sumwhr in u...also ur DOPAMINE levels!!...come out ov ur rythmic lines...u can do a lot better thn this...'cute' poem...